This week our blog topic is a picture! Who knows what this picture will do to inspire your writing!!!
Make sure you create your best piece. focus on your ideas and details, description, and order (content and ideas, organization, word choice, voice, sentence fluency, and conventions)
Here is the picture! What is real? What is the right size? Hmmmm…….Create your prompt!
Brady 100WC Week 27
One day there was a mad scientist. That one day He created a shrinking ray to shrink The Eiffel Tower But a little kid Pushed him And he accidentally shot two men with the laser. The two men were also in a sewer so they shrunk so tiny but they fell down the crack of the sewer drain. The two men didn’t realize that they were shrinking until they fell down the drain. The two men were so scared that they started to run in circles and scream But that didn’t help. The next day of two men screaming they finally became friends And they started to walk down the sewer not realizing that somebody flushed the toilet So they started running The other way cuz they saw the humongous wave of water soon they got slipped under the water but one of them found a chance to get out of the sewer and help the other dude to get out. Now that they’re out they ran straight to the forest where nobody can see them They ran into a humongous snail on a leaf so they saw the chance to make a table and the ate food and lived happily ever after
Arienne 100WC Week 27
One time I was walking to the park and I saw these two dolls on the floor with a seashell. I picked it up and brought it home to my little brother. When I walked into the door I heard someone say hi to me, I was wondering what was speaking cause there was no one in the house with me. I went in my room and sat on my bed to do homework and I see the little dolls move around on my bed, I think to myself and wonder if I am just seeing things. What do you think happens next?
Well, I think the it was the dolls who were talking, Arienne! It is no wonder they started to move around too. This is a very imaginative response to the picture prompt. I like the way your charter (you) describes what is happened very clearly ‘I picked it up’ and ‘I went in my room and sat on my bed’ but when there is an element of uncertainty you say ‘I was wondering’. So was it true, or not, I wonder?
Peyton.M 100 WC, Week 27, 2022__
Once upon a time there was a village of one centimeter tall people that lived in a great city inside of a red wood tree. The people were okay with living in their great tree until humans came near the tree. Then sometimes they would shake their tree or lean against it or spray colors into patterns on their tree with a silver can. The tree people hated all those things so whenever a human came too close they would throw pine spears at them. but it did not work so they stole a silver can that sprayed colors. They would get in position whenever a human got close and when they were at least a foot away from them they would fire the colors at their eyes and the humans would run. They did it over and over again and they finally found something to protect them, the silver can of colors.
Anaya 100WC Week 27
I had this really weird dream last night, it was about this one day where I had been playing with barbie dolls with my cousin that was 4 years old. We were playing for like 2 hours before we saw something weird about the placing of some type of construction workers, one sitting on a leaf,and the other on a wooden platform we played barbies with.We saw the construction workers talking with a snail, for some reason they decided to not do work and talk the most random-est things possible just because they were bored of doing work
Katreen 100WC Week 27
One day, I was taking a nap and I was having this weird dream where I was stuck on a mountain and had to make my way back down. I don’t know how I got there, but it was weird. Then, I woke up, and it wasn’t a dream, I was really on a mountain! I was making my way down but then I realized that everything around me, the trees, the mountains, everything was so big. Then, I realized I was standing on a leaf! It was so big that I didn’t even realize that everything around me, including me, shrank! Everything else got bigger! I finally got home but was still thinking about it.
Damian 100 WC Week 27
I daydreamed of a farmer on a leaf, kneeling down, staring at an ocean shell, and it seemed to be Fall, because the leaves were all red, yellow, orange, and green. It was also on a smooth, wood surface. I looked at him again, and he then appeared to be a worker, with an orange cap and blue shirt. And then there was another one seemingly sitting down. And they also appeared to be toys, just plastic toys that were bendy. I stopped daydreaming about that wondering what happened and why I dreamt of that. And I was back in the forest biome.
Addie 100wc week 27
One rainy afternoon. I was going for a walk. I got an umbrella and rain boots.When I was walking I saw something on the ground. It was a tiny toy. Then someone walks up to me. He said,” That’s my miss.” I looked up and he was wearing a white science coat. He said,”That toy they were trying to turn into a person so they can build a castle.” I was so surprised. I gave the toy to him. I said,”Who are you going to give the castle to ?” He said ,” Someone indeed or if you want it?” someone indeed I said.
Ryan 100 wc week 27
One day there was a leaf and it had two toy people was on it and one of the names are bob and Timmy and the snail and it has no home and the people that the people gave the snail a home and the next day the snail visited the people and they do every thing they can do. You can be nice to a snail and you can help him and you can give him a home and you can give him some food and you can keep him like a pet but you have him in a tank and you have to feed him and give him water.
Brenda 100wc week27
The thing that I think that is real is the leaf because it is big and it has the color of a leaf .The other thing that is real is the snail because it have the shape of one and the color of one.I think the pitcher is in the park because it looks like it is on a log in a park.The toy workers can be that right size and then it will look better and for everything to be really.If the leaf was bigger it will be better to so all the things that are in the pitcher will be the same size.
Logan 100wc week 27
Just a day on the construction site working on this house . The client will be mad if we dont fix it . We can move it. We gotta move it if we can build the house in time for the boss. we’re going to get fired if we can’t build it so we have to fix it first otherwise we lose our jobs. and our lives are over. So finally they moved the seven hundred pound snail so we could build a house. But there was a problem. The snail was mad so he went to the house and destroyed it and I lost my job.
Zoe 100WC Week 27
I woke up one morning feeling a little different. I thought I was coming down with a cold but I felt just fine? I decided to go outside to get everything off of my mind.I stepped one foot outside, I looked up. I screamed at the top of my lungs “EVERYTHING IS SO BIG!!!!” My panicking didn’t help because my mom ran to the back door asking me what was wrong. I only pointed, she looked up scared and turned to me. Right then a huge leaf fell with what looked like a snail on it. You won’t believe what happened next.
I really like the way you build expectation in to your story, Zoe. Even though I had seen the picture it was still a surprise when you described how everything looked so big, and then a huge leaf fell on you. I like the way you have used capital letters for emphasis when you are describing just how big everything seems to you.
Nicola100wc
Today was bad. I can’t understand what is happening now. because I can see a very big snail and that snail size is like a person! And I can see bigger than people’s leaves. I can’t admit this is happening anymore! But is it true that you can really see it?0r maybe I’m so small and the others are the same size?
“Yes! Maybe that is right!”If I wake up, I’m sure it’s back to normal so I shouldn’t have to worry, but maybe I’ll have to live my life as it is.
George 100WC Week 27
There were once a few tiny men then one day the found something interesting they found a snail they took it back to leaf city everyone was scared except me and my sister why they were scared because it was strange and slimy and slow BUT IT’S SLOW WHY ARE THEY RUNNING THEY CAN JUST WALK AWAY FROM IT BECAUSE IT’S SLOW WHY!!!!!!!! But the thing is it’s slippery but why run away from the snail? That’s what they named it then the BIG people stole are discoveries. I hate tall people so that’s the story of the first snail.
Elijah 100wc week
27
So the leaf and the snail are the real things in the picture in the blog. The other two things are made out of plastic. Because you can see the sunlight
Shining on them or a reflection that’s because they are made out of smooth plastic but why are they there? It looks like they are on a road of some sort
On a leaf maybe some abstract art of some sort
But who came up with this idea to put a snail
A leaf and and two plastic toys go on a road
Get a camera zoom in really far and take a picture
Like this
Zephiah 100wc week 27
Jorge Ortiz is a little boy and he loves playing with his action figures. Big or small Jorge would love them. One Tuesday on Saturday April 2, 2022 he went to Walmart store.”Mom look at these ones they look like construction workers can we get them?” His mom thought for a minute,they were three dollars and eventually she said yes. When they got home he got his toys and went outside to play. He saw a leaf and used it as his platform. He climbed up a hill and started playing his story was a massive rock he found crashed into their construction.
Maddy 100 wc 27
One day I was in the mountains walking around and saw two construction workers on the bench. They are both toys and a leaf and a snail i was wondering if the toys belonged to a kid and if the leaf look like it fell from the tree and i’m still wondering if they are people because they really look like people and the snail probably is not alive i took the toys and walk to this hose i saw and I knock on the door and said is this yours and the people who lived at the home did not know what i was talking about but they took the toys and kept i want back to the mountains and want back to the bench and the leaf was gone the snail was nothing was on the bench so i just pasted the bench and just kept moving
Jacob 100wc week 27 4/1/22
One day I was walking home and thought I could ask my friend if they want to go to the woods. Then i got home and called him and he said sure I was so happy.Then asked when he can come pick me up he said like now so I got ready. Then when we were there I saw a kid doing something. When he left, me and my friend went to go check it out. It was two little people on a leaf with a snail shell. Then we went home and I went to bed.
Bob the builder and Bob were on a leaf, and so was a snail. It was on the leaf because it lost its home in the forest because of a fire. That happened two years ago in 6321 the snail had a family but that got lost in the fire. Also the snail said, ¨my name is spots because i’m a rare kind of snail with black and blue spots.¨ That was why they called him spots he was a favorite of teachers and friends. They were mad that he got everything but they were just jealous of him.